Thursday, March 24, 2011

Blog Entry 7

 I think I need to write more response and need to work hard for organization and some grammar. In addition I need to have more example to support my claim. And I also need to learn more new vocabulary. I will do my best and I hope my essay can be better and I hope I can pass the CAW-Text in this semester.
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  1. CJSMarch 28, 2011 at 10:04 AM

    Hi Johsuan:

    Below you will find my response for this blog series. This is not a grade, nor is it intended to be read as an evaluation of your performance in this class so far. The evaluation of the blog series may be found in Blackboard in the gradebook for this class and the grade is derived from a totally dofferent method as described in the syllabus. What you will see below is a response to your overall writing as of this blog series. The categories are from the CAT-W evaluation rubric (what the evaluator’s use). The comments below are intended to be both descriptive (what I see) and prescriptive (what you need to work on). I will be speaking with you personally about your current strengths and weakness during class. Please feel free to ask as many questions as you like about the following in class, during office hours, or in our FB groups.

    Critical Response to Writing Task and Text: You are clearly summarizing and responding to the text.

    Development of Writer’s Ideas: Good so far, but I would like to see more development at the paragraph level with examples.

    Structure of the Response: We will work a bit more on formal essay structure, but you have the basics here.

    Sentences, Word Choice, Grammar, Usage, Mechanics: Some minor problems here, mainly at the word-choice level. Have you tried copying out text by hand (like New York Times articles)? That worked for me when I was studying Spanish.

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