Blog Entry 12: Reflection and Evaluation

          I think my summary is getting better and I can think more example to support my claim. However, I still need more development at the paragraph level with examples. The challenges that I was facing in this class is that when I wrote an essay in class I could not think about what can I write. I could not develop the idea. In the other word I am really not a good critical thinker. Sometimes I can only think about one thing to write but I know it is not enough to write a good essay I really need to have more idea and think more criticaly. In addition, sometimes I got confuse about where should I put the summary, in the first paragraph or the second paragraph. Moreover, I think I really need to learn more vocabulary to higher my essay's level. I always use the low level word. As a result, my essay looks like a low level essay. When I was writing an essay I always knew that my vocabulary is bad, this word is not in my level however, I could not think the other word, this is my problem so I really need to solve it. Sometimes I have grammar mistakes that I already learnd and remenbered all the time, but I did not realize at that time and I did not have time to reread it. As a reault, I really need to be carefore about this problem. I hope I can get better and pass this class.