Sunday, May 15, 2011

Blog Entry 17

          In our world there are many different kinds of foods. People need them every day. However, some people do not know where do these foods come from and how does it made up for. The problem is that some foods are harmful. If people do not realize the truth they may get hurt. However, some people may think that to know about the truth may hurt too. I think that it is better to be hurt by knowing the truth rather then not knowing anything.
      
            According to "The Allegory of the Cave", people do not believe the truth that they never knew before. Same as "The Trueman Show" Truman lived in the world that is not the real world and he dose not know anything about the real world. He thought that the world he lived is the real world. However, when he realized that he lived in a fake world most of his life. He wanted to go to the real world and fight with the truth. In the movie "The Matrix", Neo has the same situation as Truman. In addition, they chose the sane choice. Truman decided to go out of the fake world and Neo chose the red pill to go to the real world and save the world. Furthermore, the film "The meatrix" also wants people to realize the truth. It describes the truth of the foods that we eat. I think that people should know more about the truth and not live in a fake world.
          
           After reading all my blog entries, I think my essays are getting better. I can develop more ideas and I have more examples to support my claim. However, I still do not clear about the difference between thesis statement and claim. I know I should put my claim at the end of the first paragraph but where should I put the thesis statement?

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