Advertisements are everywhere in today's society. In the article the author talks about how prevalent do advertisements are and how they affect people's lives. Commercial advertisements are all over around people's lives. They are on TV, radio, buses, billboards and stadiums. People can even see the advertisements when they are filling their cars with gas. When people drive they can see the billboards on the buildings or on the side of the road. Many broken enormous billboards are in the countryside. People can see advertisements where their eyes can see. Advertisements are effective and influence people's brain.
I think advertisements really affect people's lives. When we see an advertisement we believe what it says. If this advertisement says that this product is really healthy and has good taste, people may think about this product when they are buying another product. However, some of them are untruthful advertisements and even not good for health. As a result people who want to lose their weight really believe the product which says it can lose weight as much as people want can get some problems from it. This is really common in today's day. I feel really terrible and angry about this. People always believe the advertisement some of them are good and people get many benefits from them but some of them make problems and even put people in danger.
I advise that people should think carefully before they buy the product which they buy it because the good advertisement. In addition, companies do not exaggerate and make untruthful advertisements. I also want people to realize that advertisements are not always right, think carefully when the advertisements says that people can do whatever they want by using that product.
End of Semester Notes and ENA101
11 years ago
Overall, what is the author doing well? (It is always good to start off with a strong point).
ReplyDeleteThe author started her essay demontrating that she got the main idea of the passage.
Is the essay around 400 words?
No it is about 300 words.
Does the author have a clear claim? What is it?
She has a claim that the advertesiment influence and affect people's live.
Does the author have a clear introduction? How could it be improved?
The author's introduction is good. She points out the author's main idea and suuport the main idea showing her opinion.
Does the author summarize the reading completely and clearly? Why or why not?
I believe that the author did a goos summary of the passage. She started by using the keys word like "In the article,the author says..." than she poits out some exmples that show in the passage.
Does the author respond to the reading with specific examples from real life?
Actually the author uses a good exmaple from real life and agree with her example.
Is the writing clear and easy to read? What patterns of errors do you see that need to be addressed in the future?
It is kind of clear the begining but when the author needs to explaing or show her opinion it turns a little confuse to understand.
In particular,The author do well on the introdution, and she give alot of opinion in her body paragraph.The author give the causes and effect.The author give advise at the last of the paragraph that the companies are untruthful advertisement.
ReplyDeleteThe author wrote a nice summay. But her response is a little short. If she says more to support her idea, it will be better.
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